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Do you want to be sure that you've written the essay of your life to ensure you get in to the college of your dreams?Submit My Essay for Review
I've seen it so many times where an applicant thinks they’re submitting a great essay with their college application, but in reality, their actually hurting their chances.
The truth is many unsuspecting applicants fail to realize that regardless of how good the essay is, can you really be sure it's good enough to go up against 1,000's of other applicants? Does it make you stick out in an ever-increasing crowd of top-notch applicants?
The research shows that it's very difficult to objectively evaluate your college essay, so you can't blame people for not realizing it...
And yet the college essay is ONE THING you can control in the application process! Don't leave it to chance!
The reality is that your essay can only have one of three outcomes:
1) Enhance your application
2) Have a neutral effect on your submission, or
3) diminish your chances of admission.
With test scores being less of a requirement for some schools, more than ever, your college essay will be the deciding factor that makes or breaks your 1st choice college admission.
Of course, you’d want your college essay to improve your chances of admission, right?
And wouldn't you love to get that advice from someone with over two decades of writing and revising the college essay?
Someone who can give you feedback on the appropriateness of your topic and where it could be improved?
Wouldn't you want to be sure that you're getting honest feedback?
On what's good and working today so that you can be sure that your essay is communicating the right message to the college admissions readers?
If you answer yes to any of these, then you need to take advantage of a benefit from Dr. Kay’s evaluation of your essay.
PROFESSIONAL EVALUATION OF YOUR COLLEGE ESSAY
Meet National Board certified Master Teacher, Dr. Kay Van Der Burg
Dr. Kay has a Ph.D. in education from the UW Madison, and has had training at both Harvard and Stanford. She holds two Masters degrees in education and was the district SAT/ACT prep teacher for one of the highest ranking districts in the country. She has been tutoring students for more than two decades and is the co-founder of Counterpoint test prep.
What You'll Get:
3 separate essay evaluations with feedback for a single college application essay prompt by National Board certified Master Teacher, Dr. Kay Van Der Burg
Unlimited 6-month access
100% Satisfaction Guarantee
Here Are Just Some of the Items Dr. Kay Will Review and Check For to Ensure You've Written the Essay of Your life:
- Your message and "voice" to demonstrate that you can write.
- Your essay clearly and directly answers the essay question.
- The opening is unique and captures the readers’ interest.
- Your writing style comes through in the essay to showcase your best effort.
- Your writing comes across as authentic, personal and is distinctly you.
- And so much more!
I'm Ready To Submit My Essay
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This opportunity has been designed for the student who’s ready to break through, do whatever it takes, and avoid the normal pitfalls nearly everyone stumbles over when trying to write their college essay.
Dr. Kay will review every sentence for
- and punctuation,
so you have the confidence within a few short days to submit the essay of your life.
You will be working side-by-side with you the whole way through the process of revising your essay!
But, We Only Have Space for Dr. Kay to Work With 10 Students at a Time.
The Investment More Than Pays For Itself,
Many Times Over!
We've priced this opportunity as affordably as possible given the amount of work, guidance and value you’ll be receiving.
The Next Step To Writing the College Essay of Your Life
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